This week has been a disaster!!! we started off the week with a positive mind that our story was fine, and developed. however, we took it to Dan Dalli for our first lot of advice and we realised that alot of it didnt make sense, and most importantly it didnt have a strong ending.
so although i started the week off by starting the thumbnails reading for the first draft of our story board, i had to stop and revise the story.
Again, jono, giles and myself were left with that and worked throughout the night on tuesday to develope a story that had a strong ending. the work paid off alot and the next day we rushed in for advice on the new story, and the feed back was very positive. it was for this reason that we decided to go with the new screne play.